Left wrist seems too slim, and you're missing a shadow line above the left arm, the shading is far to subtle and i can barely even see it. On a positive note nice details particularly in the cloth folds and face

Vision 4 stars, you quite clearly know what you want

Originality 3 and a half nice costume design but nothing paticually unique or interesting

Technique 2 no noticable shadow to show her 3d form and both all the materials only have difference in colour and not shadow highlights and texture.

Impact 2 Composition wise my mind doesn't know where i'm suposed to be looking first and with lack of a noticeable values the image looks very bland.

Do you liek critique? Really? Aw, jeez, man.

First of all, what did you reference this from? It looks poorly traced in places because your strokes lack confidence.Also, her neck isn't centered on her shoulders. I assume the scarf is a part of the character design, but if you just put it there to hide that her neck is way off in lala land, it's not helping. She has no clavicles, and no cleavage in a garment that looks like it is made to show off cleavage.

Zigzags are not adequate fold substitutes.

Her head is what bothers me the most. What is going on with her nose? What is going on with her jaw? Why can I see her eyes and eyebrow through her hair? She has no forehead.

I dunno. I'm sure you can do better, yeah?